Better Without You Chapter 4Seto made his way to the inside of a dark cave in the middle of the city. While walking in, he began questioning how on earth it was possible for a dark cave to be in the middle of a city. Aren't they supposed to be around mountain or forest areas where waterfalls are located? Then, he glared and groaned in annoyance, while hearing me type everything that he is thinking at this very moment.
"Would you stop that!?" Kaiba yells at me.
Aren't you supposed to be saving Mokuba? He is surrounded by mountain lions.
"I thought it was man-eating lions."
It could be both.
"Ugh!" Kaiba groaned in annoyance as he ran inside the cave. "I've got no time for this."
Meanwhile, in the limo, Mary-Sue wiped her last bitter tears before she began shaking her fists. She didn't want to sit around and do nothing, especially while Seto was out there. Even if he was mean to her, Mary-Sue couldn't stand to do nothing, while this asshole was placing himself in danger to save his little brother. She decided to be
Better Without You Chapter 2Alright Jasmine, I'm tired of this!
"Alright, what's the big deal this time?" Jasmine asked, hands on her hips. "And why aren't you rhyming anymore?"
Because I'm the author of this story and what I say goes. I've been bottling this up, since the first chapter and I'm getting rather perturbed. You made my favorite characters into one dimensional stereotypes that praise your name and my favorite character into a villain. In fact, she's not even a villain! She's just the only person that wasn't controlled by your stupid boot and you used your powers to make it seem like she's the bad guy! You basically framed Tea for something she never did!
"She deserved it! She's always making those annoying friendship speeches and has to hog Yugi and Yami all to herself. She's practically the Louis Lane of Yu-Gi-Oh!"
First off, she only made those annoying friendship speeches in the Yu-Gi-Oh English dub done by 4Kids, who are the worst dubbing company on the planet. I mean seriously, have you